Trapped between four bars
With not a single sign to escape
Forced to obey when said
“Sit! Stand! And Take out your books”
Oh! Our ears echo with long lecture
Innocents bit by a swarm of bees
Struggling with the hailstorm of knowledge
Triumph with rapid glutting of erudition
Even so a second home school is
For wings spread when masters gone
We jump, shout and play
Relishing in fun so unrestrained
Reading and writing, listening too
Side conversations keep us going
Affirming that school is indeed a second home
Reverberating with the music of laughter
Besieged with laughter, faces aglow
Is what it’s like to really be in this bower!
Wonderful Best wishes
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Wonderfully written…
Excellent command our language..
Loved it..
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Nice poem, best wishes for many more
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Nostalgic Feel–Great Going.
Best wishes…
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Brilliant Choice of words and what a flow of words. Well done.
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Cool one. Looks like you are gifting yourself with this wonderful poem on your birthday.. 👌
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Very nice
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Amazing vocabulary Sahana…..you reminded me of my school days and indeed it was one of the best times of my life …keep ot up….
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Lovely sahana…keep going..expecting more n more poems from you
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Good one. Best wishes Sahana.
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Nice poem..Good reminiscence for all of us
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Wonderful Sahana! Great choice of words… sweet refresher of our unforgettable school life memories indeed ! Keep it up 👍
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Wow! Wonderfully written.
Perfect choice of words.
Just awesome sahana
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Wow! Excellent Sahana
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I hope we love to go to school now if you will be our English teacher. Atleast now I will learn English properly. Great going miss.
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Wow.. nice..
I started thinking that workplace is my third home..
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Great work Sahana!! Took me down the memory lane!! Amazing choice of words penned down so well!!
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Well written Sahana.
A small correction though. Instead of innocent you could have used innocence.
Instead of hailstorm some other phrase.
Teachers always ask a volley of questions etc….
Don’t mistake me. Just felt like sharing my thoughts
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Sahana, very nicely narrated, you have made my schooldays rewind👍👏👏
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Well written, earlier about Teacher (Guru) now about School (Gurukulam). Excellent Sahana!!!
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Excellent! Sahana.. All the very best
Look forward to read your other poems and many more to come from you
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