Thud! Crash, echoes propagated around the hall
Bang! Family heirloom smashed into a million atoms
“My remote!” vibrated my high-pitched voice
Alas, mother roared at us to retreat
As the moon crept and twilight arose
The crickets and leaves sang a lullaby
Cuddling into his arms locking me tight
He favoured me with a warm good night
“Hurray! I won the prize” he cried the morrow
“See, see. You can’t get like this now can you?”
My eyes all red I glared at him with envy
“We’ll see! I will get it next time.” Growled I
Restless enough not to sleep as his exam results arrived
Seeing my brother pass it, I cried with joy and sadness
Now, for he’d leave me and go. Leaving me alone
Unable to decide whether to shed tears of glee or misery
“Remember our mischief and our enjoyment.
Recalled the time we mixed shampoo and shaving cream
Rewind the time when painted our sleeping father’s face
Please don’t leave! Don’t leave me alone.”
Life pouring its cruelty on me
Being unable to see happiness in anything
Always feeling a pair of hands missing
I really wish that he were with me!
Nice one
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Wonder ful… 😌
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Words shows how u miss your brother 😔.. Could feel it…all for good…happy writing…. waiting to see more👍
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Touching words
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Aww…🙁
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We would have missed this, if he delayed packing his bags. He is going to be just few streets away. Time to double your acts! Shaving creams and Shampoos aren’t far as well…remind him hereon with clicks of your solo acts and special poetic reminders for a pleasant envy. Best wishes to both of you, for your love and bond to flourish forever.
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Shows their bonding and upbringing!! Kudos keep writing more!!
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Touching 👫
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Really great way to expresse your heartfelt bonding with your brother, wish you both good luck 👍
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From that little 💓..just awesome
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Such a sweet one expressing affection for brother.
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Wonderful Sahana.
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Touching way to express how she feels about her brother. Great work!!
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Emotions deeply erected in your heart and paved the way for such a great poem. Your brother will be proud of you.
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Reflects your affection towards your brother, Excellent Sahana
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Two powerful emotions – joy and sadness, whipped and blended so beautifully and offered in a platter! The sheer thought, the choice of words and phrases brought back nostalgic childhood memories, days of fun and fights with my siblings!
I am bereft of words!! Keep going Sahana!!
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Wow, what a motherly touch, it s awesome. I was touched by the way. Very good. Keep going.
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Beautiful 👌 expression of sibling relationship .❣️
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Heartfelt emotions running through your veins is well reflected. Beautiful indeed.
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Beautiful expressions 👍👍👌
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Nice poem Sanjana.I am sure your brother must be missing you too.
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As usual well written .. keep going
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Emotional – good one Sahana! 👍🏼🌿
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Wonderful Sahana! Really reflects yours bonding and emotions..
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This one is really very touching …. can feel your emotions….its all about sibling bonding …
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Affection towards brother is well expressed. So sweet…. Let this love dwell around her brother forever.
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