Ideas buzzing in my mind
Puzzled me not knowing what to write
Heavily tensing up and losing my eraser
Unable to erase, forced to write a perfect poem
Searching every corner of my brain for the perfect idea
Setting my hair as it flies over my eyes
Deeply in thought, for an out of box idea
With deep sleep, trying to win over me
Tapping my book and chewing my pencil
Clueless I sat resting against my pillow
Glancing around for something special to jot down
Praying for a good idea to trigger my thought
Maybe I’ll write about a flower, a ghost
Then it dawns upon me an interesting idea
I furiously scribbled it on my book
Here’s wishing you luck in trying to read it!
Nice nd different poetic creation👏👏
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Excellent,Creative. Keep writing.
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Ha ha, I wish you do more scribbling in the future as well. Different and a cool idea. 👌
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A very good composition. Keep it up. All the Best!
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Excellent👍👏😆. I was wondering what is the theme that you would choose finally.. Flow is toooooo good Sahana..
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Innovative thought, good one!
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Cool
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Lovely, you are so fluent in your words, it just flows from your mind and your hand writes. It is not scibbling it is gushing. Keep going.
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Lovely and wonderful, keep it up
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Good one …Nice
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Great one, proven your creativity and talent inside you. Keep it up…
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Excellent work Sahana! Well done!
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Lovely poem. Lucky to read. Keep Rocking…
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Very nice Sahana..was able to picturise as we read through…a very nice,creative unusual thematic depiction of thoughts running in your mind.. makes reader inquisitive ; and the choice of words does really exhibit your out of box thinking unlike usual theme based poems ..Keep writing …Good luck..!
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Superb Sahana! Very unique…..missed your poems for quite sometime! So glad this came our way! Loved it! Keep it rocking!!!! All the very best
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thanks. please suggest topics for poem
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simplicity at it’s best…is all I can say…keep it up…
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Very nice sahana
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Really ingenious!
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Dear Sahana, simply superb and exciting! Was eager to read the last paragraph like a movie climax! Poem portrayed an interesting approach with fantastic flow. Best wishes!
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