Marking the dawn of an auspicious day
Heralding the sun was something bright
Blinding light like a thousand stars
Deafening noises resonating all around
For an hour (maybe slightly longer)
Abiding by the rules towards less pollution
In an endeavor to save the planet
We Indians came together on the festival of lights
A sight to cherish- people adorned in finery
Traditional clothes and shimmering jewelry
A treat to the taste buds – an assortment of sweets
A choice of savories adds to the flavor
A congregation of the family
To revel in the victory of good over evil
In modern days, the festivities continue
To MEET, To GREET and Best of all To EAT!
Wish You All a Very Happy Deepavali
Young Poem World 
Sahana, this is a Diwali dhamaka. Keep it up.!!!
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Awesome Sahana…. happy Diwali wishes
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Nice lines Sahana! Cheers!
“Blinding light like a thousand stars”
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Sahana, I can see that you are adding new words to your vocabulary and that makes your poems quite unique for this age group. Also, I see a bold poetess in you who doesn’t worry about rhyming words and just shares the thoughts in the most elegant way you want. Be like this and don’t ever change.
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Keep it up sahana…beautifully penned ☺
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Great poem Sahana!!! keep it up!! I would agree to everything what Sonu has mentioned!!
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Hurray!! Most awaited ! Excellent one Sahana! Loved the poem. As always… unique choice of words. Wishing you a wonderful Deepavali and May you keep the poetess in you rocking! 👍😊
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Lovely Sahana. I love the way you have woven the poem around everything that’s Diwali.
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Amazing choice of words and so aptly written depicting contemporary context!! Great work Sahana!! Keep it up!!!
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Wonderfully written . Congrats dear keep on writing. God bless you.
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Perfect for Diwali
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wow, a very nice Diwali release. happy to see the poet in you growing. keep rocking more….
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Very nice poem, Sahana! Wish you and your family a very happy Diwali too!
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Really good one, I love this reading multiple times, hearty congratulations and wish you very happy Diwali 🙂
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Happy Diwali Sahana!
I see a progressive change in your style, choice of words…. lovely
Looking forward to seeing a poem on karthigai Deepam
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Wonderful messaging on an auspicious day. Keep it up.
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Good one
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Good Sahan. Happy Diwali wishes
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Superb , Diwali captured very well in words.
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