Huffle and chug to a stop
As soon as the station arrives
Out of the window I see
A live canvas so enchanting!
Noisier than markets
An array of smells assaulting the senses
As crowded as banquets
Here! The train comes!
Buzzing like bees all over the station
Porters juggling luggage’s, guard waving flag
Vendors hawking products, parents clasping children’s hands
All for a few minutes and then the train chugs away.
Young Poem World 
Wow.superb.brings back my childhood memories of me travelling with my parents .
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Very nice.. keep writing
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Very well done..so thoughtful and good observation, reflects in the way the scene is painted with the power of words. Way to go Sahana.. wish you a wonderful future
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Well done … best wishes 👍
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Loved it.. I had read story about a little girls journey in a train by Pratham books.. the beautiful illustrations from that book was vivid as I read the poem..will see if I can find the book and send the pics
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Awesome poem, I have to admit that I learn new words through your poems…. Keep helping me learn new words
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Good one… Keep rocking
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Wow. Excellent.. Keep up the good work sahana
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Short and sweet
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Superb Sahana
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Well written. Your eye for detail is amazing.
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