Bubbling excitement all over
Festive mood shared by all
Men and women of all ages
People wearing colorful dresses.
Huge number of people rushing about
To buy alluring dresses, earing’s and handicrafts
To play wonderful games like Twister, Nerf and water ball
Kids ready to devour cakes and pastas.
I see a big man with a small moustache
Wearing a green kurta and white veshti
He keeps announcing all good events
Using his mike he now announces a poetry competition.
I am so lucky for it’s my talent
Speaking of poetry makes me fly in the sky
And I took my book and wrote a jolly poem
And this is the poem. I take a deep breath and recite!
Choice of words -too good Sahana!!! Keep it up .
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Superb! Especially I just adore the ending ….
I am your big fan… 😊 Proud of you
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Lovely keep it up
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What an observation of all small and nice items in the carnival
your poem carried me to the carnival
keep writing
looking forward for next poem
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Another wonderful performance…I am feeling short of words as every time ur poem amazes me with the level of creativity you bring in your poems….keep it up!!!
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Wow!!! The ending 🙂 kudoos ….
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Good plot and narration!! Keep it up
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Very Nice Poem Sahana !! Look forward to your writing !!!
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Dear Sahana, Awestruck reading your poems!!!!!
Kudos to you, my dear!!!
Extremely happy to read and keep inspiring me !!!! Best wishes!!!
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Very nice.
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Dear sahana
Congratulations at the outset…reading your poems takes me to the world of words….candidd description joining hands with appropriate diction lends the poem a new dimension. ….try employing and experimenting new techniques especially with the opening and closing linws.this will give the po5a fresh look. ..keep smiling and enjoy the poetry of life
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Very nice, Keep writing
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Excellent. Love it.
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