There was a wonderful world
Not much far in space
Kids were always lured
By the wonders of this place
Fountains flooded with chocolate
Jelly beans floating in hundreds
Grabbing a fork and plate
Children devour them in hundreds
Skies of cotton candies
Gleaming in shades of pink
Pouring a rain of toffees
Making the surprised people blink
All these wonderful things
You’d be lucky to see
If you to this land, fortune brings
Don’t be too shy to eat.
POEM BY SAHANA
Young Poem World 
Nice poem, Sahana. Keep it up.
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Excellent. Keep going Sahana. Best wishes, KvS family
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Excellent 👌
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Fantastic sahana
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A WONDERFUL poem
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Lovely Sahana! Every kid’s fantasy world truly brought out! So much genuineness!
Keep up the fantastic work dear. Proud of you!
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nice one….ur imagination is beyond a normal kids capability…..!!! u r blessed with such rich vocabulary
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Sahana in wonderland !!!
Was reminded of the gems advertisement as I read through the poem. While you bring all the originality and innocence in the words you write, I would also recommend you to read more poems of renowned writers/poets. This will give you more insights and take you to the next league ….all the best…stay blessed…
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Brilliant depiction of imagination in simple words
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Wonderful Sahana.. i can imagine the fantasy land as I read the simple and articulate words in the poem.
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Excellent Sahana. Keep rocking. Truly amazed with the choice of words..
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Well written dear.
Wish we were in that wonderful 🌎
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Very nice
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