“My son so strong, my son so brave”
Says the mother proudly to her husband
“Lovely, handsome and smart, he’s the God of Gods!
Here comes our son Nicholas!”
Next day at the house started the great battle
Mother and son so furious that they broke all the walls
There go the chairs and tables, up and down the house
Mother and Nicholas so furious that they broke all my dolls!
Father and I so curious to dig the reason of this war
We stood like a wall between Nicholas and mother
And stopped the war in the middle separating the two battlers
To our surprise this war had started for a silly fruit.
The day ended on a bitter note, mom and Nicholas sleeping apart
And next day when we woke up they were not there in their cots
What a shock we got when we saw them in the garden, playing shuttlecock
Strange mom and Nicholas! What are they up to next?
Young Poem World 
Excellent and wonderful Poem. Mom and Son’s relationship cannot be explained any more better than this. Hats off to the Young Poet. Have just brought out the reality in front of my eyes and I cannot take my eyes out of this Poem …
Well done ..
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Excellent Sahana.. Way to go !!!
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Nice Poem to explain the relationship of a Mom and Son. All the best!!!
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A great start indeed sahana. Eagerly waiting for the next.
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Wow! Well written! Waiting eagerly for the next!
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Lovely Poem and excellent clarity. Keep it up.
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Good one… Excellent command over the use of phrases
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Wonderful poem …!! Impressed by the simplicity in which parent child relationship is shown. was able to visualise the scenes line by line…!! keep it up…!!
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Dear Sahana, My heartiest congratulations. Wishing you come up with many more poems. Stay blessed and grow in life with your passion.
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Wow!! Sahana dear😍
So true .
Penned the perfect relationship between Mom & Son
Amazed at your poetic way .
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Absolutely fabulous from such a young mind that’s shows prodigious talent for such varied thoughts on human emotions. Wishing you a wonderful journey as an author par excellence. Live it up and may all your cherished dreams come true. God bless.
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Awesome Sahana.
Many more to come, all the very best 😊
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Well done SAHANA.
Very well portrayed the mom n son relationship… young poet keep it up and continue the good work.
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Excellent poem Sahana. Keep writing😍
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Wonderful depiction of bonding relationships.
Great heights to reach my poet
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Excellent sahana👌 very beautiful poem. God bless you dear.
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Loved it !!
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This poem perfectly explains the essence of true love between Mom 👸🏻 and Son 🙎🏻♂️ Really superb talent you are Sahana\m/expecting lot more.
All the best 💐
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Wonderful dear…god bless u…Wish u a bright future
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Super Sahana .. Way to go
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Superb Sahana! Mother and son love beautifully portrayed.May God bless our budding poetess. All the best to you.
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Next is be between “dad and sahana”☺☺☺👍👍…nice write up all the best
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Excellent.
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Well done Sahana… Stay blessed!!
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Sahana …..great start. Eagerly waiting for the next
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Creators are not made they are born. Wonderful & creative! All the best Sahana! 👌🌿👍
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Excellent script… Well arranged sequence of events throughout the poetic story….All the very best Sahana…
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Well done Sahana.
Nice poem… Giving emotions, suspense and family inside details.beautifully worded.i know you deserve more. Waiting for great poems and articles.
My best wishes.
Games uncle
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Well done Sahana… keep up the good work … very creative and meaningful !!! All the very best and hearty wishes
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Innocent, simple and uncomplicated. Sahana your thoughts are so clear and remind us that life is so simple. Just put aside your differences and move ahead…
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Everyone talks about father and daughter relationship these days .. good to see someone writing about Mom and son !!excellent !! ! Well done Sahana !!
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This innocence is so cute!!! Way to go .. all the very best Sahana 🙂
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Lovely, keep it up
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Amazing phrase play! Such innocence 🙂 wow
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Truly Awesome ! Very well articulated Sahana. Look forward for many more to follow. Keep up your passion.
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God bless you Sahana.Continue to write many more.
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Keep it up sahana!!😊
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